Tear at your eyes and the sun might set.

If the sky knew
what the earth had planned
it probably would no longer
coax the sun up each morning
but instead become black
from mourning and haunted
by images of it’s own past
and the horrendous future.

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7 thoughts on “Tear at your eyes and the sun might set.

  1. This resonates. I really like the personification with the earth, the imagery with the sun, and the theme at work here. Nicely done.

    I wanted to thank you for coming back to my blog even after I had neglected it for so long. I’m trying to write some more, and you as a reader is really a treat. Thank you so much.

    Your friend,
    B.B.

  2. Good to see that I still recognise this place!
    😉

    It’s been too long, no idea where time went.
    I enjoyed this one, seems at times I need a poem ‘Ben-style’.

    Hope all is well over there my friend.

    Spaz

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