If the sky knew
what the earth had planned
it probably would no longer
coax the sun up each morning
but instead become black
from mourning and haunted
by images of it’s own past
and the horrendous future.
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Agitation of hands. Strength of words. 
well said – enjoyed this
This resonates. I really like the personification with the earth, the imagery with the sun, and the theme at work here. Nicely done.
I wanted to thank you for coming back to my blog even after I had neglected it for so long. I’m trying to write some more, and you as a reader is really a treat. Thank you so much.
Your friend,
B.B.
So true… sigh…
Do you like how hard I tried to get ‘morning’
and ‘mourning’ both into it.
😀
“Do you like how hard I tried to get ‘morning’
and ‘mourning’ both into it.”
I can relate to that kind of obsession 😉
Nice piece.
Good to see that I still recognise this place!
😉
It’s been too long, no idea where time went.
I enjoyed this one, seems at times I need a poem ‘Ben-style’.
Hope all is well over there my friend.
Spaz
It’s all going rather splendidly thanks Spas.
Seem to be finding bigger and better muses all the time.
Glad you came round for a visit.
May your next be even sooner.
B