7 comments

  1. deanjbaker · August 29, 2008

    well said – enjoyed this

  2. theair · August 30, 2008

    This resonates. I really like the personification with the earth, the imagery with the sun, and the theme at work here. Nicely done.

    I wanted to thank you for coming back to my blog even after I had neglected it for so long. I’m trying to write some more, and you as a reader is really a treat. Thank you so much.

    Your friend,
    B.B.

  3. raeofsunshine · August 30, 2008

    So true… sigh…

  4. zaphodfreek · August 30, 2008

    Do you like how hard I tried to get ‘morning’
    and ‘mourning’ both into it.
    😀

  5. howard · August 31, 2008

    “Do you like how hard I tried to get ‘morning’
    and ‘mourning’ both into it.”

    I can relate to that kind of obsession 😉

    Nice piece.

  6. spasmicallyperfect · September 3, 2008

    Good to see that I still recognise this place!
    😉

    It’s been too long, no idea where time went.
    I enjoyed this one, seems at times I need a poem ‘Ben-style’.

    Hope all is well over there my friend.

    Spaz

  7. zaphodfreek · September 4, 2008

    It’s all going rather splendidly thanks Spas.
    Seem to be finding bigger and better muses all the time.
    Glad you came round for a visit.
    May your next be even sooner.
    B

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