Haiku for Sally

When the day drags on
I know my dreams will be full
of your soft, grey eyes.

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10 comments

  1. howard · May 1, 2009

    nice.

  2. tomachfive · May 6, 2009

    You’re blessed to have beheld them.

  3. zaphodfreek · May 6, 2009

    Thanks guys.
    I know.

  4. raeofsunshine · May 7, 2009

    my friend wrote a Doctor’s Note Haiku (whilst drunk, mind you). Here it is:

    My patient can’t work.
    He looks like he can puke shit.
    He can’t work all week.

    Your haiku is much better, but i wanted to share 🙂

  5. krkbaker · May 7, 2009

    what a sweet haiku.

  6. zaphodfreek · May 7, 2009

    I like it rae. 😀
    I might give some silly ones a go.

    Thanks Kim. I may or may not have a thing for this girl
    but I think if I remember the colour of her eyes
    it’s probably a good sign.
    I wrote the Haiku because Howard asked me if I’d like to contribute something for his handwritten poetry thing and suggested maybe having a go at it. Glad, as always, to hear from you.

    What do you reckon Howard? Would it do?
    I’m sending you some stuff tonight!

    B

  7. sarah flanigan · May 12, 2009

    oh ben,
    how wonderfully sweet.
    sarah

  8. zaphodfreek · May 12, 2009

    Thanks Sarah
    🙂

  9. zaphodfreek · July 2, 2009

    I don’t like that smiley.

  10. zaphodfreek · August 29, 2009

    This might be slightly risky.

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