Poem Favoured – 13/01/08

fudged flummery

I met her on a Tuesday
and you didn’t even know.
we coffeed and chatted,
we smile and lied.
her eyes looked just like mine,
her hair a mockery.
I took a sip,
she took 2.
I ordered black
and she tried blacker.
I laughed when she left,
smoothing her rumpled feathers.
I saw my reflection
in her shadow,
you settled, you tried
you believed in her strength,
cause we’ve been
apart for so long.
but I’m acidic in an
innocent rainfall,
I’m destructive
in your perfect china life.
I’m your bull,
and she’s your pattern.



  1. vesper de vil · January 13, 2009

    I adore the last four lines!

  2. zaphodfreek · January 14, 2009

    She is rather tremendous,

  3. siubhan · January 14, 2009

    love the rhythm, the back-and-forth-ness in this. nice.

  4. krkbaker · January 19, 2009

    I hopped over. Thanks for the referral.

  5. luciavandyke · February 1, 2009

    i LOVE this…

  6. zaphodfreek · February 10, 2009

    Well then I would suggest a trip over there and a few comments to show her love.

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