15 comments

  1. Naughty Heather · April 7, 2007

    Oh! Fabulous!

    Speaks to my core.

    Thank you for sharing it.

  2. raeofsunshine · April 9, 2007

    that’s what I want too.

    This is a good one Ben.

  3. tomachfive · April 9, 2007

    Sex is overrated. There are divine moments and there are moments of rut. But to hug and fall in love joins more than bodies, it unites souls for eternity. Or is this to say, sex gets in the way of love sometimes?

  4. zaphodfreek · April 9, 2007

    Heather – Ah well. I try :] Glad you like it.

    Rae – It does seem like a nice thing, ay? Not
    that I don´t enjoy the other part but it´s
    so much more enjoyable when you find
    someone to love. Takes the guilt or
    fakeness out of it I suppose. Glad you
    liked it. There´s a lot of me in the things
    I write.

    Tom – Rut. Thst is exactlçy what I meant. As i
    said just above, it´s so much better when
    you find someone to love. Maybe it´s a bit
    of both of your suggestions.

  5. vesper · April 9, 2007

    i love how your blog changes wardrobes. it’s lovely.

  6. zaphodfreek · April 9, 2007

    Haha. Thanks. It´s simply that I change my moods and my mind and…..I get bored easily.

  7. krkbaker · April 10, 2007

    This is very raw, the use of the f word shocks you into paying attention to the direction of the poem. I liked it. Kim

  8. vesper · April 11, 2007

    I will be password protecting my blog sometime within the next couple days. If you want to continue accessing my blog and want to obtain a password, please email me: vesper7@gmail.com.

  9. zaphodfreek · April 11, 2007

    Kim – It´s always seemed to be one of those words I use when I want to sound…..serious. Like I really mean it. And in this case I reckon it fits.

  10. spasmicallyperfect · April 11, 2007

    This has to be one of my favourites. A powerful subject which just doesn’t get enough exposure.
    Gees sometimes I wish we were back in Jane Austin times where you had no choice but to seduce with words and eyes only.
    Well done.

  11. zaphodfreek · April 12, 2007

    ~I whole heartedly agree

  12. Rob Kistner · April 13, 2007

    Like the urgency and resolve. Good poet’s voice in your stuff.
    Love is fine, but without fucking, it’s just love.
    …Rob

  13. zaphodfreek · April 14, 2007

    Maybe true but I’d prefer both.
    Thanks for the comment.
    I appreciate.

  14. sarah flanigan · April 20, 2007

    the difference between passion and love. well said.
    sarah

  15. zaphodfreek · April 20, 2007

    Ah, cheers.

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