I don’t want to fuck in the sand
and curl my toes in the heat.
I don’t want to taste the grit and moisture
between your teeth
or run my nails across your back,
oily with sweat.
I want to smooth down your hair
and whisper your name,
to be able to
fall in love.
Speaks to my core.
Thank you for sharing it.
that’s what I want too.
This is a good one Ben.
Sex is overrated. There are divine moments and there are moments of rut. But to hug and fall in love joins more than bodies, it unites souls for eternity. Or is this to say, sex gets in the way of love sometimes?
Heather – Ah well. I try :] Glad you like it.
Rae – It does seem like a nice thing, ay? Not
that I don´t enjoy the other part but it´s
so much more enjoyable when you find
someone to love. Takes the guilt or
fakeness out of it I suppose. Glad you
liked it. There´s a lot of me in the things
Tom – Rut. Thst is exactlçy what I meant. As i
said just above, it´s so much better when
you find someone to love. Maybe it´s a bit
of both of your suggestions.
i love how your blog changes wardrobes. it’s lovely.
Haha. Thanks. It´s simply that I change my moods and my mind and…..I get bored easily.
This is very raw, the use of the f word shocks you into paying attention to the direction of the poem. I liked it. Kim
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Kim – It´s always seemed to be one of those words I use when I want to sound…..serious. Like I really mean it. And in this case I reckon it fits.
This has to be one of my favourites. A powerful subject which just doesn’t get enough exposure.
Gees sometimes I wish we were back in Jane Austin times where you had no choice but to seduce with words and eyes only.
~I whole heartedly agree
Like the urgency and resolve. Good poet’s voice in your stuff.
Love is fine, but without fucking, it’s just love.
Maybe true but I’d prefer both.
Thanks for the comment.
the difference between passion and love. well said.